tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2446670791795795027.post7308932781296072561..comments2023-05-30T11:34:27.448+01:00Comments on nordicblackbird.com: Requiem in BlueNat Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02988451801046005601noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2446670791795795027.post-28625019261657816802010-07-21T19:57:09.426+01:002010-07-21T19:57:09.426+01:00Thank you very much, Gordon :-)
Hmmmm, i see you p...Thank you very much, Gordon :-)<br />Hmmmm, i see you point about that preposition. Yes, you right, although taking it off will bring my meter to right shambles, lol! <br />Need to re-think that line. Thank you :-))Nat Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02988451801046005601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2446670791795795027.post-28084024735135281282010-07-21T10:21:56.640+01:002010-07-21T10:21:56.640+01:00These are wonderful images, Nat. I particularly e...These are wonderful images, Nat. I particularly enjoyed the stanza "I shall write it deep inside us.....".<br /><br />One thought: "born to endure each of world tide" is the word 'of' necessary? It is easier to read out loud without.Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.com